tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3930257775613871058.post8688802246953461335..comments2024-03-04T16:16:16.546+05:30Comments on कविताओं के मन से....!!!!: तस्वीरvijay kumar sappattihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06924893340980797554noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3930257775613871058.post-8004646959586286442009-02-14T16:13:00.000+05:302009-02-14T16:13:00.000+05:30kuch tasveer jo hamare jehan mein hoti hain wo kab...kuch tasveer jo hamare jehan mein hoti hain wo kabhi nhi banti kyunki unhein hum aakar nhi de sakte sirf mehsoos kar sakte hain , uske sath ji sakte hain aur mar sakte hain.<BR/><BR/>wo jo khwab hota hai na wo sirf hamara hota hai aur usko roop dene ki jaroorat bhi nhi hoti......kyunki wo hamara hai khas.vandana guptahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00019337362157598975noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3930257775613871058.post-6910203226333970642008-11-17T18:34:00.000+05:302008-11-17T18:34:00.000+05:30Aapne mere blogpe tippanee kee aur kaha yahan suko...Aapne mere blogpe tippanee kee aur kaha yahan sukoon milega...gar sach poochho to sukoonke saath, saath ek dardbhi rubaru khada ho gaya..!Ek aseem peedase wabasta ho gayee.<BR/>Kin, kin panktioyonko misaalki taurpe pesh karun??<BR/>Mai phir phir ke lautungee..abhee jee nahee bhara..aaj raat lambe samaytak padhneka iraada rakhtee hun !shamahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10349457755551725245noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3930257775613871058.post-77988627961536125982008-11-17T09:59:00.000+05:302008-11-17T09:59:00.000+05:30areyyyy bhai maar dala kisi ko nahi aapne mujhe fa...areyyyy bhai maar dala kisi ko nahi aapne mujhe fanaaaaaa kar dala bahut hi uncha bahut hi umda likh dala....<BR/>anmol shabdo se gunthi hai ye hai sundar mala........!!अक्षय-मन!!https://www.blogger.com/profile/05340059809215740706noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3930257775613871058.post-49023772172699161432008-11-16T23:32:00.000+05:302008-11-16T23:32:00.000+05:30poori kavita ek shabdchitra ban kar nikal gayee an...poori kavita ek shabdchitra ban kar nikal gayee ankho ke samne se...jaise manaspatal par koi shbadoin se ek akriti uker raha ho<BR/><BR/>bhaut achi lagi apki ye kavita...<BR/><BR/>sara blog padungi dheere dheere....<BR/>ahsas ko jubana dena kathin bhi hai aur saral bhi..agar ahsas ko ji liya ek dam saral warna use samjhna bhi mushkil <BR/><BR/>regards<BR/>sakhigyaneshwaari singhhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16752930608738766658noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3930257775613871058.post-19402029859131756592008-11-15T20:08:00.000+05:302008-11-15T20:08:00.000+05:30hello friend, i know hindi very little .phir bhi ,...hello friend, i know hindi very little .phir bhi , i enjoyed your poem "pyaar ke bazar main "very new thinking and heart touching lines. I felt the same as though it is of me. may i quote a line of Colridge :IT IS BETTER TO BE LOVED AND LOST THAN NEVER LOVED AT ALL " thanku dhanyavaad. i will read other poems soon & let you know my views ok . regards: sripad gumastesripadraohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04311762659859653499noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3930257775613871058.post-45231532836358396922008-11-15T12:02:00.000+05:302008-11-15T12:02:00.000+05:30कहीं सुना था ;मेरे ज़नाजे के पीछे सारा ज़माना निकला...कहीं सुना था ;<BR/>मेरे ज़नाजे के पीछे सारा ज़माना निकला <BR/>मगर वो ना निकले जिनके लिए ज़नाज़ा निकला |.<BR/>वो तो साथ में थे ना ??अनुपम अग्रवालhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14259746714891353242noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3930257775613871058.post-53190928828805634952008-11-15T10:55:00.000+05:302008-11-15T10:55:00.000+05:30मौत ने हँसते हुए उस कागज़ पर ,तेरा और मेरा नाम लिख...मौत ने हँसते हुए उस कागज़ पर ,<BR/>तेरा और मेरा नाम लिख दिया ;<BR/>और मुझे अपने आगोश में ले लिया .<BR/>उसने उस कागज़ को मेरे जनाजे पर रख दिया ,<BR/>और मुझे दुनियावालों ने फूंक दिया.<BR/>और फिर..<BR/>इस दुनिया से एक और मोहब्बत की रूह फना हो गई..<BR/><BR/>" read your blog first time, so amezing thoughts, these particular lines are really very touching... liked it very much"<BR/><BR/>Regardsseema guptahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02590396195009950310noreply@blogger.com